Hello, I like to do a self-evaluation assignment because I can improve myself for the next speech. I have been prepared but I need more time. My topic was about Ukraine and it's impossible to give a speech about it and tell what is really important having only 5 minutes. I think that I achieved the purpose of my speech because I told revealed (unfold) the purpose and thesis of my speech, but I wanted to have more time for each point in the body of the speech. I felt very comfortable and confident because I knew that this topic might be interesting for my audience and it's pertain to their life because they can decide to visit this country as a tourists. If I have the chance to tell my speech again I will change my delivery and to put some accents on places where to go and why because I think it left unclear. My next speech I want to add more cites, facts and opinions of scientists. I want to learn something new from next chapters in the book and try to implement in my speech. My next goal for improving my speech in all steps will be trusting myself that I can do it in time limitation without rush or bustling . After watching my speech I noticed that these little cards with hints were very distracted and spent some time to find what to read and what to tell next and I understand that I have to try learn to tell my speech without cards or have just key words or somebodies expressions.
I compared my previous evaluation for for the demonstrative speech with evaluation form for the informative speech and I found that I didn't say any fillers like "um", "uh". If rate my eye contact on a scale from 1-10 I would say it is 8 or 9. I don't know why but I was really surprised that I didn't have eye contact with my audience because I remember that I looked at my audience always except that tie when I switched my slides or read my cards, I remember faces of my classmates and smiles to me. I'd like to see my performance on video to see how was it from the side, I trust my teacher and her evaluation and next time I will try to be focused on audience all my speech. I know for sure that I don't have any problem with eye contact and in my previous speech I didn't have this problem but I admit that I could lost eye contact because had power point presentation and I was supposed to comment my slides and describe some things. So next time I'll do my best. I forgot to tell in my intro in my speech that I was born in Ukraine and I have credibility to share info with my audience. I mentioned in the body of speech source citation, but I understand that it is not enough and I will do more. I know that my informative speech was built on the credible sources and I have written all of them in my outline. Once again it is hard to evaluate myself but I think that my grade would be B+ of A- because I worked really hard on my preparation, but I have to work more on my delivery part and eye contact. I almost agree with my grade but thank you my teacher that she gives me a chance to grow more and do more job to get A next time and I have a good motivation. I think that this speech was better than my last speech because I told almost everything and I used power point presentation and it was more interesting for my classmates. I think I have to work more on my conclusion to make reviewing of main points more clear. So I will work more and harder.
I compared my previous evaluation for for the demonstrative speech with evaluation form for the informative speech and I found that I didn't say any fillers like "um", "uh". If rate my eye contact on a scale from 1-10 I would say it is 8 or 9. I don't know why but I was really surprised that I didn't have eye contact with my audience because I remember that I looked at my audience always except that tie when I switched my slides or read my cards, I remember faces of my classmates and smiles to me. I'd like to see my performance on video to see how was it from the side, I trust my teacher and her evaluation and next time I will try to be focused on audience all my speech. I know for sure that I don't have any problem with eye contact and in my previous speech I didn't have this problem but I admit that I could lost eye contact because had power point presentation and I was supposed to comment my slides and describe some things. So next time I'll do my best. I forgot to tell in my intro in my speech that I was born in Ukraine and I have credibility to share info with my audience. I mentioned in the body of speech source citation, but I understand that it is not enough and I will do more. I know that my informative speech was built on the credible sources and I have written all of them in my outline. Once again it is hard to evaluate myself but I think that my grade would be B+ of A- because I worked really hard on my preparation, but I have to work more on my delivery part and eye contact. I almost agree with my grade but thank you my teacher that she gives me a chance to grow more and do more job to get A next time and I have a good motivation. I think that this speech was better than my last speech because I told almost everything and I used power point presentation and it was more interesting for my classmates. I think I have to work more on my conclusion to make reviewing of main points more clear. So I will work more and harder.
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